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Story in footnotes:
-- Spring: Discuss the work qua writing
-- Summer: Discuss friendship with Dwale
-- Autumn: Discuss doubt
+- Spring: Discuss facts
+- Summer: Bring in friendship with Dwale
+- Autumn: Discuss shared doubts as to abilities
- Winter: Discuss death