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@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ New time of return: never.
A wife (on a technicality)
on the lawn (hers?)
out back (quietly)
-in shock (tears: not yet).
+in shock (tears: not just yet).
A house. Silent and aging, rotting deck boards,
and a dog with searching eyes.