diff --git a/writing/poetry/challenges.html b/writing/poetry/challenges.html index 0752c410f..8fca48590 100644 --- a/writing/poetry/challenges.html +++ b/writing/poetry/challenges.html @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ New time of return: never. A wife (on a technicality) on the lawn (hers?) out back (quietly) -in shock (tears: not yet). +in shock (tears: not just yet). A house. Silent and aging, rotting deck boards, and a dog with searching eyes.