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Vos took another half-step back. “Wait, thousands?“

“It is proving difficult to keep up with the feeds,” she said, speaking slowly. Perhaps still receiving updates? “One of me is just reading the feeds and marking a tally every time a missing instance is mentioned.”

“Thousands, Jesus,” Hanne whispered. “I should check in on (TODO). And probably–“

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She jumped as Pierre sagged briefly against Vos, then either quit or left the sim. “He…I mean…” Vos began, shook her head, and then followed suit

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She jumped as Pierre sagged briefly against Vos, then either quit or left the sim. “He…I mean…” Vos began, shook her head, and then followed suit.

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Do you two need anything? Reed sent to Vos. Or just space and quiet?

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The latter, she replied after a few long seconds. The sensorium message was so clearly sent between sobs that Reed had to swallow down a similar sensation rising in his throat.