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Madison Rye Progress 2024-07-13 07:59:13 -07:00
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@ -106,15 +106,21 @@ What will become of me?
<li>The narrator dreams</li>
<li>Ritual of mourning/spirituality (move to before nap?)</li>
<li>(Bit about seeking change?)</li>
<li>Connection between joy and unbecoming/haste of CA (group A)</li>
<li>The Dog</li>
<li>Connection between stillness and unbecoming (group A)</li>
<li>The Rabbit Chaser and the child</li>
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</li>
<li class="done3"> <a href="008.html">008</a> &mdash; The Woman wanted to unbecome, she makes her decision<ul>
<li>Connection between joy and unbecoming/haste of CA (group A)</li>
<li>Connection between stillness and unbecoming (group A)</li>
<li>Unbecoming conversation with her friend (group A to new chapter?)</li>
</ul>
</li>
<li class="done3"> <a href="008.html">008</a> &mdash; The Woman wanted to unbecome</li>
<li class="done3"> <a href="009.html">009</a> &mdash; The Woman talks with Dry Grass with her idea, who mentions Serene, they talk and she turns into a tree on a sidewalk in the city sim, unclear if she quits, the narrator struggles with how they feel about this, modern vs postmodern, earnest vs ironic, subversion vs playing straight, living vs not, devolves into repeated phrases as Rye overflows / Carved from wood</li>
<li class="done0"> <a href="009.html">009</a> &mdash; The Woman talks with Dry Grass with her idea, who mentions Serene, they talk and she turns into a tree on a sidewalk in the city sim, unclear if she quits, the narrator struggles with how they feel about this, modern vs postmodern, earnest vs ironic, subversion vs playing straight, living vs not, devolves into repeated phrases as Rye overflows / Carved from wood<ul>
<li>Dry Grass visits Rye to talk this through, accidentally convince each other</li>
<li>Dry Grass helps The Woman, Rye loses her shit</li>
</ul>
</li>
</ul>
<h2 id="notes_1">Notes</h2>
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