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 <li class="done0"> Part 2 &mdash; Phys-side is being a little sketchy about what happened, turns out there was a reset and a lot of work behind the scenes after a coordinated attack between phys- and sys-side, taking the form of a generalized weapon that wiped out most of the System. Large chunks of it were restored after a lot of work and help from the Artemisians, but not total success &mdash; virus loophole was fixed (incl singular attacks), but no guarantee there won&rsquo;t be another work-around, plans to split the System into smaller pieces, move some of them to Earth/Sun Lagrange points<ul>
-<li class="done0"> <a href="007.html">007</a> &mdash; Dry Grass loops Reed &amp; co into discussion with phys-side engineers (maybe she&rsquo;s been booted from her stanza anyway for talking with the 8th?) Huddle to talk about why they&rsquo;re being so cagey</li>
+<li class="done0"> <a href="007.html">007</a> &mdash; Dry Grass loops Reed &amp; co into discussion with phys-side engineers (halt called to the communication embargo between stanzas) Huddle to talk about why they&rsquo;re being so cagey</li>
 <li class="done0"> <a href="008.html">008</a> &mdash; Talking with Dry Grass, Cress, and Tule about feelings</li>
-<li class="done0"> <a href="009.html">009</a> &mdash; Larger meeting with other representatives of clades with missing members, bit more info (loophole was patched, but no guarantee), introducing concept of splitting the system up</li>
-<li class="done0"> <a href="010.html">010</a> &mdash; Clade representatives form a group, start organizing/strategizing/investigating, contacted by chill phys-side syseng, learning even more about both what happened and plans to split system, plus how phys-side is seeing things</li>
+<li class="done0"> <a href="009.html">009</a> &mdash; Larger meeting with other representatives of clades with missing members, bit more info (loophole was patched, but no guarantee), introducing concept of splitting the System up, cross-clade merges, turns out someone was left with memories from a few previous attempts</li>
+<li class="done0"> <a href="010.html">010</a> &mdash; Clade representatives form a group, start organizing/strategizing/investigating, contacted by chill phys-side syseng, learning even more about both what happened WRT CPV bomb and collectives, plus how phys-side is seeing things</li>
 <li class="done0"> <a href="011.html">011</a> &mdash; Finding up-tree (or maybe down?) instance of person who caused the whole thing, seems super upset, promises they&rsquo;re unable to contact that instance, but whether or not they&rsquo;re telling the truth left up in the air</li>
 <li class="done0"> <a href="012.html">012</a> &mdash; Funeral for Marsh, though what if reconstructing?</li>
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