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Ioan Balan
-- Sys-side historian and launch coordinator
+- Sys-side historian
Dear, Also, The Tree That Was Felled (Dear)
May Then My Name Die With Me (May Then My Name)
-- Sys-side storyteller
+- Sys-side storyteller and launch coordinator
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Sys-side
- Ioan A is actually kind of eager to not be taking part in next huge thing, and to be reading and compiling Codrin’s letters from launch side.
- Ioan B interviews locals who specifically did not go
-- Ioan C acts as launch coordinator
-- May Then Thy Name co-authors the story with Ioan as a permanent-yet-evolving mythology, specifically changing small details to make it grandiose, turn it into a new mythology
+- Ioan C acts as early system historian
+- May Then Thy Name, her role as launch coordinator diminished post-launch, co-authors the story with Ioan as a permanent-yet-evolving mythology, specifically changing small details to make it grandiose, turn it into a new mythology. She also provides the historical background.
Launch-side