From 25971b17032f6ff4067da93128e30f35e037482e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <mscottclary@nvidia.com>
Date: Fri, 20 Aug 2021 11:30:12 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

---
 writing/post-self/toledot/index.html | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/index.html b/writing/post-self/toledot/index.html
index cd33bbe32..4a70e4ff4 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/toledot/index.html
+++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/index.html
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>Ioan Balan<ul>
-<li>Sys-side historian and launch coordinator</li>
+<li>Sys-side historian</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>Dear, Also, The Tree That Was Felled (Dear)<ul>
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>May Then My Name Die With Me (May Then My Name)<ul>
-<li>Sys-side storyteller</li>
+<li>Sys-side storyteller and launch coordinator</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>
@@ -110,8 +110,8 @@
 <li>Sys-side<ul>
 <li>Ioan A is actually kind of eager to not be taking part in next huge thing, and to be reading and compiling Codrin&rsquo;s letters from launch side.</li>
 <li>Ioan B interviews locals who specifically did not go</li>
-<li>Ioan C acts as launch coordinator</li>
-<li>May Then Thy Name co-authors the story with Ioan as a permanent-yet-evolving mythology, specifically changing small details to make it grandiose, turn it into a new mythology</li>
+<li>Ioan C acts as early system historian</li>
+<li>May Then Thy Name, her role as launch coordinator diminished post-launch, co-authors the story with Ioan as a permanent-yet-evolving mythology, specifically changing small details to make it grandiose, turn it into a new mythology. She also provides the historical background.</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>Launch-side<ul>
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
 </ul>
             </article>
             <footer>
-                <p>Page generated on 2021-08-19</p>
+                <p>Page generated on 2021-08-20</p>
             </footer>
         </main>
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