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Outline
-- Epigraph
-- Esau said, “I am about to die; of what use is a birthright to me?” / Jacob said, “Swear to me first.” / So he swore to him, and sold his birthright to Jacob.
+- Epigraph
+- Esau said, “I am about to die; of what use is a birthright to me?” / Jacob said, “Swear to me first.” / So he swore to him, and sold his birthright to Jacob.
- Act I
- Act II
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Notes
- The ships (identical) are similar to from Accelerando combined with a scissors mechanism a la Ilium and a rail gun. There’s a small version of the System (plenty of room for folks to fork, etc), an RTG for power, some external physical manipulators and materials (like 1-2 tons) for repair along the way if needed, a few attitude jets, and a light sail once it’s launched on each. Thin scaffold type thing about 10k kilometers long spun around the middle. In the scaffold is a rail gun to assist in propulsion as the ships are flung out into space by angular momentum, each in opposite directions.
+- The launch process is the first time the sys-side and phys-side have worked together in any notable capacity since secession.
+- Release should take the form of an ARG similar to the original Qoheleth.