diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html index 3dbcc3d8a..f89a77834 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html @@ -218,8 +218,8 @@ how say
  • Codrin Bălan — Talks with Sarah back at home about what things will look like going forward (expand DMZ to idk like 1/3 system size, allow Artemisians to join, allow any to join Artemis as fifthrace). After Sarah leaves, goes for a walk with Dear, mentions what happened with AWNH and TN - 2136
  • Tycho Brahe — The DMZ expands, sets up a border crossing of sorts, starts to think about what to do, about how there’s this idea that he invest fully that just showed up, fully formed, in his head - 1589
  • Ioan Bălan — Ioan and May re the name; May does a therapy - 1538 (expand for the rest of the morning before therapy, I just can’t remember what I was considering)
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  • Codrin Bălan — Convinces Dear and partner to join em in both DMZ (Do they leave forks behind? Maybe Codrin is so giddy ey doesn’t even care if they do) - Will write the history with Genet, but is going to take a more active role than amanuensis, learn about therapy. (Not librarian b/c different person now) A solution to boredom? Boredom finally a problem? - 1953 (expand with boredom, different person)
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  • Ioan Bălan — Ioan and May discuss ramifications on history/mythos, and how none of the Bălans want to write it; news from Castor is shown to be shaped well by TN/Jonas, data dump from Artemis arriving only after local TN/Jonas have shaped expectations, etc - 1642
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  • Codrin Bălan*** — Convinces Dear and partner to join em in both DMZ (Do they leave forks behind? Maybe Codrin is so giddy ey doesn’t even care if they do) - Will write the history with Genet, but is going to take a more active role than amanuensis, learn about therapy. (Not librarian b/c different person now) A solution to boredom? Boredom finally a problem? - 1953 (expand with boredom, different person)
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  • Ioan Bălan*** — Ioan and May discuss ramifications on history/mythos, and how none of the Bălans want to write it; news from Castor is shown to be shaped well by TN/Jonas, data dump from Artemis arriving only after local TN/Jonas have shaped expectations, etc - 1642
  • Tycho Brahe*** — invests fully, ceremony a la Sasha’s eulogy, see both local and Artemis view from him - 1553
    • diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/006.html b/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/006.html index 18e69b813..79c5f0f87 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/006.html +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/ioan/006.html @@ -65,10 +65,10 @@

    “When one of the second people finally screwed up the courage to ask one of the first people, “Where do you come from? Where do we come from? What is our origin, our root?” they answered, “We were hoping you could tell us.”“

    Ey laughed and ruffled a hand between May’s ears before petting the fur back into order once more.

    “Do you really suppose the Artemisians will look to us for answers?”

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    The skunk grinned, dotting her nose to eirs. “I do not see how they could not, my dear. Is that not what exploration is?”

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    The skunk grinned, dotting her nose to eirs. “I do not see how they could not, my dear. Is that not what exploration is? Do we not both dream?”