From 436179b2d6969f4540ace7921d208e9243414fb9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <makyo@drab-makyo.com>
Date: Fri, 4 Sep 2020 13:28:01 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 writing/sawtooth/index.html      | 4 ++--
 writing/sawtooth/morning-of.html | 6 +++---
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/writing/sawtooth/index.html b/writing/sawtooth/index.html
index c492a83fe..5be4cb254 100644
--- a/writing/sawtooth/index.html
+++ b/writing/sawtooth/index.html
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 <li class="done3"> Story: <a href="happy-lesbians.html">Gigs</a></li>
 <li class="done2"> Story: <a href="aposematism.html">Aposematism</a></li>
 <li class="done4"> Flash: <a href="valentimes.html">Valentimes</a></li>
-<li class="done0"> Flash: <a href="morning-of.html">Morning Of</a></li>
+<li class="done3"> Flash: <a href="morning-of.html">Morning Of</a></li>
 </ul>
 <h2 id="rules">Rules</h2>
 <ul>
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
 <p>Nigh on february and i don&rsquo;t know why. </p>
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diff --git a/writing/sawtooth/morning-of.html b/writing/sawtooth/morning-of.html
index c8c2b59f4..3dea07b60 100644
--- a/writing/sawtooth/morning-of.html
+++ b/writing/sawtooth/morning-of.html
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 <p>Add in the six hour drive to Portland and the complete inability to sleep during the night before, and it was no surprise that words and meaning were crowding uncomfortably inside his head.</p>
 <p>&ldquo;Alex? You ready?&rdquo;</p>
 <p>He shook himself out of his reverie. Liv was standing there, radiant as always, with an efficient-looking nurse. &ldquo;Yeah.&rdquo;</p>
-<p>They led him back to the pre-op room, where the ringtail stripped out of his clothes and into a hospital gown.</p>
+<p>They led him back to the pre-op room, where the young wolf stripped out of his clothes and into a hospital gown.</p>
 <p>They shaved the back of his hand and got the IV line in place.</p>
 <p>They gave him a pill to take &lsquo;for his nerves&rsquo;.</p>
 <p>They introduced him to the anaesthesiologist, an intense and hulking bear.</p>
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 <p>He nodded, sitting on the edge of the bed. Was he? Was he anything? He didn&rsquo;t feel okay, but he didn&rsquo;t feel not-okay. &ldquo;It feels what you say about flying. How you get past security, and then everything is suddenly someone else&rsquo;s responsibility, and all you have to do is let go and go along with what they say?&rdquo;</p>
 <p>Liv nodded.</p>
 <p>&ldquo;It&rsquo;s like that.&rdquo;</p>
-<p>&ldquo;They told me to tell you you have until they come back for you to change your mind.&rdquo; The wolf&rsquo;s grin was sly. &ldquo;I told them if you didn&rsquo;t keep going, I&rsquo;d kick your ass.&rdquo;</p>
+<p>&ldquo;They told me to tell you you have until they come back for you to change your mind.&rdquo; The older wolf&rsquo;s grin was sly. &ldquo;I told them if you didn&rsquo;t keep going, I&rsquo;d kick your ass.&rdquo;</p>
 <p>Alex laughed. &ldquo;Why&rsquo;s that?&rdquo;</p>
 <p>&ldquo;You&rsquo;ve been talking about this surgery non-stop for almost a year. If I had to listen to you talk about it anymore, I think I&rsquo;d go nuts.&rdquo;</p>
 <p>&ldquo;Right.&rdquo; He cupped spindly hands over his breasts beneath the gown. The garment made him feel tiny, young. &ldquo;I&rsquo;d probably go nuts, too. It&rsquo;ll be so nice to be rid of &lsquo;em.&rdquo;</p>
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 <p>And then he was truly in their hands.</p>
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