From 4d290211a113e597cdeff8eed315fd145f011519 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Fri, 31 Dec 2021 15:55:10 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- diary/2021-12-31.html | 12 +++++++++--- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/diary/2021-12-31.html b/diary/2021-12-31.html index 3e3a174d5..85d62ee55 100644 --- a/diary/2021-12-31.html +++ b/diary/2021-12-31.html @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ - Zk | Workshop - First sentences + Zk | Workshop - First sentences with Jay Nicorvo @@ -9,10 +9,16 @@
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Workshop — First Sentences

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Workshop — First Sentences with Jay Nicorvo

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Starting sentences with “It is…” (or was, etc)

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  1. Only add a third word — “It was television.”
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  2. Stretch it out, less than ten words — “It was television, pure and simple, without dispute.”
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  3. Let it ramble — “It was television, pure and simple, without dispute, and though some may dispute that, I maintain that it stands still as the platonic ideal, a metonym for all shows that come after, the Ur-show that took a genre, a medium, a generation away from tenuous explorations and shoved it without remorse into the world we inhabit today, and one might wonder, should such a thing not have happened, how unfortunate and insipid our lives-in-entertainment might be today.”
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