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Yared Zerezghi
- Phys-side System tech
- Campaigns for individual rights for Sys-side individuals, with the caveat of secession
-- Followws arc of Paul from Toledot Yeshu: doesn’t actually really like the system. Wants it to not be a part of the world, but is willing to cause the split through subterfuge
Yosef Demma
-- NWAC (Northwest African Coalition) politician
+- NEAC (NorthEest African Coalition) politician
- Hires Yared to induce the secession from Phys-side
+- Followws arc of Paul from Toledot Yeshu: doesn’t actually really like the system. Wants it to not be a part of the world, but is willing to cause the split through subterfuge
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Diiistant cousin of Michelle, always feels some strange connection to her, too shy to communicate
-~de (because why not be goofy with names, it’s the dang future)~
-- ~Member of Luddite collective~
-- ~Wants to prevent launch b/c Earth is kinda falling apart and rapidly depopulating, and it resents that.~
+- REJECTED: too many characters. de (because why not be goofy with names, it’s the dang future)
+- Member of Luddite collective
+- Wants to prevent launch b/c Earth is kinda falling apart and rapidly depopulating, and it resents that.
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Offline
- Douglas struggles with being a hermit/launch tech/coordinator but also wanting to talk with Michelle - basically his whole POV is the tech aspect of the launch, while also providing history of life outside since secession
-- ~~~de and its collective struggle to get anyone to even want to prevent the launch, but humanity has mostly turned inward and lost interest in exploration, now super conservative, as life is pretty damn hellish outside their heads, leaning heavily on escapism. Uploading is seen as just sort of the thing you do when you get tired enough, if you don’t die first, etc. Jealous because upload and lose connection to earth, or remain on earth and never do anything interesting, strange desire to keep the species on the same path. Boils down to fatalism, and its story is learning why that is.~~~
+- REJECTED: too many characters. de and its collective struggle to get anyone to even want to prevent the launch, but humanity has mostly turned inward and lost interest in exploration, now super conservative, as life is pretty damn hellish outside their heads, leaning heavily on escapism. Uploading is seen as just sort of the thing you do when you get tired enough, if you don’t die first, etc. Jealous because upload and lose connection to earth, or remain on earth and never do anything interesting, strange desire to keep the species on the same path. Boils down to fatalism, and its story is learning why that is.
- Kind of wondering if de should just be told through Douglas. Already a lot of characters.
- PAYOFF: tied with May Then My Name’s histories, a renewed sense of adventure outside of the mind
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Launch: phys-side: Douglas - Douglas feels a feel while working on the launch - 1021 - TODO merge with below
Launch: phys-side: Douglas - Douglas and May write to each other about the launch - 2722
Secession: sys-side: Michelle - Michelle dies among her clade, passing on tasks to first lines (True Name gets launch?) - 1131
- Launch: phys-side: de - REJECTED: de no longer a POV character - Disappointed that launch went through regardless, walks the station in a daze, thinking backwards from current thought - 887~
+ Launch: phys-side: de - REJECTED: de no longer a POV character - Disappointed that launch went through regardless, walks the station in a daze, thinking backwards from current thought - 887
Secession: phys-side: Yared - Yared uploads, the final before secession - 3080
Launch: launch-side: Codrin#Green - The triad tell each other fictional stories around the remnants of the fire of why they left no forks - 2599
Secession: sys-side: Michelle - Michelle meets with Council of Eight, discusses spending a bunch of reputation to fork; meets up with Jonas and pledges True Name - 2293
- Secession: phys-side: Yared - Yared gives a speech on individual rights, then drawn aside by Yosef, out for coffee, tells of secession proposal - 2608
+ Secession: phys-side: Yared - Yared gives a ‘speech’ on individual rights, then drawn aside by Yosef, out for coffee, tells of secession proposal - 2608
Launch: phys-side: Douglas - Douglas answers May’s questions - 3489
Part II - Progression