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(True Name tries to guide the talks toward simply finding out more information thinking of gaining the upper hand to prepare for some sort of exchange, then simply to maintaining control over the situation. Tycho gets more and more brave. Turns out all they want to see if humans are suitable to become fifthrace and suggestion that they be welcomed onto the LV similarly if so - basically ensuring greater continuity of all races (similar to TN/Jonas’s stated goals, stated later). WAQ/AWNH discovered, Turun Ka accepts in stride, had been watching for such to better gauge humanity and how they work. To that end, Codrin gives Turun Ko a copy of On the Origin of Our World against True Name’s suggestions, which is the final step to moving forward with the plans - yay Codrin)
+(True Name tries to guide the talks toward simply finding out more information thinking of gaining the upper hand to prepare for some sort of exchange, then simply to tries maintaining control over the situation, but for once, she’s out of her league. Doesn’t help that the looseness of time on Artemis feels a lot like getting lost at first. Tycho gets more and more brave. Turns out all they want to see if humans are suitable to become fifthrace and suggestion that they be welcomed onto the LV similarly if so - basically ensuring greater continuity of all races (similar to TN/Jonas’s stated goals, stated later). WAQ/AWNH discovered, Turun Ka accepts in stride, had been watching for such to better gauge humanity and how they work. To that end, Codrin gives Turun Ko a copy of On the Origin of Our World against True Name’s suggestions, which is the final step to moving forward with the plans - yay Codrin)