diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.html b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.html index 9e86c2a5f..b885b5cfc 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.html +++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/004.html @@ -44,7 +44,9 @@
“I can’t picture anything having a bigger tail than you, May. Definitely outrageous.”
“I thought you liked my tail.”
“I do!”
-“Excellent, I shall allow you to live another day.” She laughed and dotted her nose against eir cheek. “I had considered becoming a panther for some time, but I like my tail too much.”
+“Excellent, I shall allow you to live another day.” She laughed and dotted her nose against eir cheek. “I had considered becoming a panther for some time, but I am quite attached to my tail.”
+“Or it is to you.”
+She laughed.
“You know, I’ve always wondered,” ey said, getting an arm around her. “Why did the most political stanza of the clade stay skunks? Wouldn’t it be more effective to be humans? It’s not like the majority of folks on the Systems are furries.”
“Only three of the ten are skunks anymore, and you have met all three. Besides, I think End Waking is the only one of the three of us who has not spent time in human form. Some of me in other relationships were — or perhaps are — humans. I spent six months with you in that form, even, remember?”
Ey nodded. “It was pretty weird.”
@@ -132,7 +134,7 @@Ey laughed and shook eir head, leaning forward to ruffle over her ears. It was a much more pleasant response to a note from True Name than ey’d expected. “You’re right, I don’t. I’ll just have to trust you on that. Skunks are so weird.”