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Tycho Brahe — Tycho, True Name, Answers Will Not Help, other astronomer (Paolo Verda), and System tech (Sovanna Soun) fork to basically create a massive workforce to get all this done as fast as possible, .com - 1924
Codrin Bălan — Meets up with the Artemis team at dinner, somewhat tense around True Name, but learns a bit more about the current status and how well under control it is (or how tightly controlled Odists are keeping it) - 2168
Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Tycho has a dream about meeting the Artemisians, wakes and talks with TN about preemptive cultural exchange so that they know more about each other, works with Why Ask Questions thinking she’s Answers Will Not Help. - 1758
- Interlude - Ioan and May discuss news, but also Codrin’s notes about feeling dragged along - 1846
+ Interlude — Ioan and May discuss news, but also Codrin’s notes about feeling dragged along - 1846
Codrin Bălan — Tycho#Tasker, Sarah, have dinner with Codrin, Dear, Dear’s partner, talk about jobs, what they used to do, how odd it is to have one. Tycho gets message re: Artemisian culture and importance of time-bending, and shares with table, Tycho says TN refuses to accommodate on Castor. - 2324
Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Tycho watches news disseminate with True Name, learns of various reactions.
Codrin Bălan — Walk with Dear, talking about what to expect/not expect (actual understanding may take decades, some other stuff), Dear admits that this might be one it’s glad to sit out b/c its existence relies on being able to understand, they talk about that
- Tycho Brahe#artemis — They work out a date, start making preparations e.g: building the DMZ out a bit, forks for who’s going, senses how little input he will have but keeps to himself, letting #Tasker know to talk with Codrin back at house on prairie
+ Tycho Brahe#Artemis — They work out a date, start making preparations e.g: building the DMZ out a bit, forks for who’s going, senses how little input he will have but keeps to himself, letting #Tasker know to talk with Codrin back at house on prairie
Act II - exchange of emissaries, discussions, knowledge share
@@ -130,39 +130,42 @@ Artante Diria of fourthrace, representative
- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — Tycho learns about time from Turun Ka and that this is how they managed to work fast: modifying time rather than forking
- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — Emissaries are set up with sandbox sim for downtime however they please; catches up with Tycho and Sarah Genet about how learning is going (hint: everyone’s baffled)
- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Exchanges notes with Codrin#Artemis, hinting at swap with WAQ/AWNH
-- Interlude - Ioan and May discuss how it feels to know that the talks are taking place and may be over by the time they hear about it
-- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Talks with Sarah Genet about what the two parties are learning and how its impacting his view of the System and Artemis
-- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — Watches TN try to have a discussion with Turun Ka regarding history, and it is an exercise in mutual misunderstanding, starting to feel out of his league with #Artemis being about social aspects
-- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — After watching similar discussion of TN misunderstanding, meets up with Sarah Genet over break, discusses note from Codrin#Emissary
-- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Talks about current status during break, suggests ideas to Tycho about what he could be paying attention to re: politics/society/history in terms of the stars, leads to question of whether there were others that they’ve met along the way but didn’t join them arising, but told not to ask yet
-- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Compares utility differences between forking/time manipulation (mostly Tycho, but also TN/WAQ)
-- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Compares political differences between forking/time manipulation (Mostly TN, but Codrin/Sarah), AWNH is acting strange
-- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Tycho, getting bored, directs talk to origins and path they’ve taken. Inexact answers, which has TN intrigued. She talks with the group after to discuss possibility that they might be being shady rather than just leaning on “oh we manipulate time”
-- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — There’s a conversation between TN and Turun Ka around how the various races manage sentiment. Tycho is surprised at it being frank, Sarah suggests that she might be working on many levels, Codrin starting to worry about their sanity
-- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Discusses openly about news from Artemis and some of the problems the Systems have had in the past, Artemisians describe some of their own. AWNH and TN are both struggling now, each getting occasional flickers of Sasha/Michelle. They call a brief break, Turun Ko says take as long as you need, AWNH cries, refuses.
-- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Talks with Sarah Genet about what the two parties are learning and how he’s reevaluating the History.
+- Interlude — Ioan and May discuss how it feels to know that the talks are taking place and may be over by the time they hear about it
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Talks with Sarah Genet about what the two parties are learning and how its impacting his view of the System and Artemis
+- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — Watches TN try to have a discussion with Turun Ka regarding history, and it is an exercise in mutual misunderstanding, starting to feel out of his league with #Artemis being about social aspects
+- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — After watching similar discussion of TN misunderstanding, meets up with Sarah Genet over break, discusses note from Codrin#Emissary
+- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Talks about current status during break, suggests ideas to Tycho about what he could be paying attention to re: politics/society/history in terms of the stars, leads to question of whether there were others that they’ve met along the way but didn’t join them arising, but told not to ask yet
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Compares utility differences between forking/time manipulation (mostly Tycho, but also TN/WAQ)
+- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Compares political differences between forking/time manipulation (Mostly TN, but Codrin/Sarah), AWNH is acting strange
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Tycho, getting bored, directs talk to origins and path they’ve taken. Inexact answers, which has TN intrigued. She talks with the group after to discuss possibility that they might be being shady rather than just leaning on “oh we manipulate time”
+- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — There’s a conversation between TN and Turun Ka around how the various races manage sentiment. Tycho is surprised at it being frank, Sarah suggests that she might be working on many levels, Codrin starting to worry about their sanity
+- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Discusses openly about news from Artemis and some of the problems the Systems have had in the past, Artemisians describe some of their own. AWNH and TN are both struggling now, each getting occasional flickers of Sasha/Michelle. They call a brief break, Turun Ko says take as long as you need b/c time is maleable, AWNH cries, refuses.
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Talks with Sarah Genet about what the two parties are learning and how he’s reevaluating the History.
Act III - manipulations fail b/c whoops the Artemisians are way, way better at this
-- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — AWNH breaks down (revealing she’s AWNH, not WAQ), quits, break immediately called, TN is having a REALLY HARD TIME, Turun Ka shows up, TN comes clean, talks about getting lost, Turun Ka says Artante’s race ran into similar, but stops her from talking about AWNH further for now
-- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — While all the above is happening, Tycho steals some time with Stolon to try and talk science, but they both wind up talking about being in over one’s head and the futility of politics vs stability of science
-- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — Part way through a talk on languages (WAQ has learned a lot about this leading up to it), TN gets news re: AWNH (a fork enters the space, quits, merges - Artemisians like huh???), calls halt to meeting, preempts everyone getting news separately by announcing what happened, tries to gloss over the swap quickly (b/c of course she’s planned), but Turun Ka speaks up, says that this is part of confirmation required. For what? Tune in next time…
-- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Codrin, Sarah, Turun Ko, Artante meet up (while TN talks with Turun Ka, Iska, and Tycho chills with Stolon) and discuss actual point of meetings: to determine whether humanity is a suitable fifthrace. None of the Artemisians know/will say what the gating factors are, but think they’re close - don’t tell TN (are they supposed to know? Shrug, but implied if they tell TN, that’s a point against them)
-- Interlude - Ioan and May speculate on how True Name must be taking it locally/Pollux, suggest Codrin’s grand gesture for Dear being bringing the polycule to the DMZ, no more house on the prairie.
-- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — Codrin gives Turun Ko a copy of On the Origin of Our World (against TN’s suggestion, but she is in damage-control mode), which, after (pronoun) reads it, turns out to be the final step towards moving forward with accepting as fifthrace. Yay Codrin
-- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Steals time with Stolon on break, joined by Iska and Sarah, talk about joining Artemis, what races have learned from each other re: science.
-- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — Watching talks resume, starting to think y’know what, fuck it, maybe he’ll just stay if allowed. Stolon’s neat, the science is good, and having this to look forward to has given him more purpose in life. Interrupts talk to mention such regardless of glares from TN. Silence from Artemisians, one can assume internal chatter, then “that was the final gating step - wanting to join. We will welcome you as fifthrace” - from there they will learn all they want, have X days to do exchange, share entire libraries back and forth on data band, can keep format however they want on Castor. TN FROWNS but WHATEVER FINE
+- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — AWNH breaks down (revealing she’s AWNH, not WAQ), quits, break immediately called, TN is having a REALLY HARD TIME, Turun Ka shows up, TN comes clean, talks about getting lost, Turun Ka says Artante’s race ran into similar, but stops her from talking about AWNH further for now
+- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — While all the above is happening, Tycho steals some time with Stolon to try and talk science, but they both wind up talking about being in over one’s head and the futility of politics vs stability of science
+- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — Part way through a talk on languages (WAQ has learned a lot about this leading up to it), TN gets news re: AWNH (a fork enters the space, quits, merges - Artemisians like huh???), calls halt to meeting, preempts everyone getting news separately by announcing what happened, tries to gloss over the swap quickly (b/c of course she’s planned), but Turun Ka speaks up, says that this is part of confirmation required. For what? Tune in next time…
+- Codrin Bălan#Emissary — Codrin, Sarah, Turun Ko, Artante meet up (while TN talks with Turun Ka, Iska, and Tycho chills with Stolon) and discuss actual point of meetings: to determine whether humanity is a suitable fifthrace. None of the Artemisians know/will say what the gating factors are, but think they’re close - don’t tell TN (are they supposed to know? Shrug, but implied if they tell TN, that’s a point against them)
+- Interlude — Ioan and May speculate on how True Name must be taking it locally/Pollux, suggest Codrin’s grand gesture for Dear being bringing the polycule to the DMZ, no more house on the prairie.
+- Codrin Bălan#Artemis — Codrin gives Turun Ko a copy of On the Origin of Our World (against TN’s suggestion, but she is in damage-control mode), which, after (pronoun) reads it, turns out to be the final step towards moving forward with accepting as fifthrace. Yay Codrin
+- Tycho Brahe#Artemis — Steals time with Stolon on break, joined by Iska and Sarah, talk about joining Artemis, what races have learned from each other re: science.
+- Tycho Brahe#Emissary — Watching talks resume, starting to think y’know what, fuck it, maybe he’ll just stay if allowed. Stolon’s neat, the science is good, and having this to look forward to has given him more purpose in life. Interrupts talk to mention such regardless of glares from TN. Silence from Artemisians, one can assume internal chatter, then “that was the final gating step - wanting to join. We will welcome you as fifthrace” - from there they will learn all they want, have X days to do exchange, share entire libraries back and forth on data band, can keep format however they want on Castor. TN FROWNS but WHATEVER FINE
Conclusion - DMZ expands, several upload to Artemis
-- Tycho Brahe — Fresh out of talks, returns to his sim, looks up at the sky, new big feelings, TN shows up w/champagne. She’s kind of sad, but guess it went okay, says she’s trying to be earnest about just wanting to have something to celebrate with someone else, but isn’t sure she knows how anymore.
-- Codrin Bălan — Talks with Sarah about what things will look like going forward (expand DMZ to idk like 1/3 system size, allow Artemisians to join, allow any to join Artemis as fifthrace)
-- Interlude - Ioan and May discuss ramifications on history/mythos, and how none of the Bălans want to write it; news from Castor is shown to be shaped well by TN/Jonas, data dump from Artemis arriving only after local TN/Jonas have shaped expectations, etc
-- Tycho Brahe — The DMZ expands, sets up a border crossing of sorts, starts to think about what to do, about how there’s this idea that he invest fully that just showed up, fully formed, in his head
-- Codrin Bălan — Convinces Dear and partner to join em in both DMZ and on Artemis (Do they stay? Maybe Codrin is so giddy ey doesn’t even care if they do) - Will ey write a history? No, that’s for Genet, ey’s done. Ey might become a librarian!!!!
+- Tycho Brahe — Fresh out of talks, returns to his sim, looks up at the sky, new big feelings, TN shows up w/champagne. She’s kind of sad, but guess it went okay, says she’s trying to be earnest about just wanting to have something to celebrate with someone else, but isn’t sure she knows how anymore. Do you know how old I am, Tycho Brahe? I am 222 years old, a fork of an individual who is 259 years old. I have learned many habits, and I have forgotten many others. We may retain our memories of concrete events, of who we must have been, but I am no longer the True Name of 2124. Even remembering her feels like remembering an old friend. I remember her perfectly, and yet I do not remember how to be earnest. I do not remember how to simply celebrate. I do not know how to simply be.
+- Codrin Bălan — Talks with Sarah about what things will look like going forward (expand DMZ to idk like 1/3 system size, allow Artemisians to join, allow any to join Artemis as fifthrace)
+- Interlude — Ioan and May discuss ramifications on history/mythos, and how none of the Bălans want to write it; news from Castor is shown to be shaped well by TN/Jonas, data dump from Artemis arriving only after local TN/Jonas have shaped expectations, etc
+- Tycho Brahe — The DMZ expands, sets up a border crossing of sorts, starts to think about what to do, about how there’s this idea that he invest fully that just showed up, fully formed, in his head
+- Codrin Bălan — Convinces Dear and partner to join em in both DMZ and on Artemis (Do they stay? Maybe Codrin is so giddy ey doesn’t even care if they do) - Will ey write a history? No, that’s for Genet, ey’s done. Ey might become a librarian!!!!
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+ Epilogue
+- Tycho Brahe — invests fully, ceremony a la Sasha’s eulogy, see both local and Artemis view from him
- Epilogue - Tycho invests fully, ceremony a la Sasha’s eulogy
(True Name tries to guide the talks toward simply finding out more information thinking of gaining the upper hand to prepare for some sort of exchange or power imbalance, then simply to tries maintaining control over the situation, but for once, she’s out of her league. Their goal is basically ensuring greater continuity of all races (similar to TN/Jonas’s stated goals, stated later))