diff --git a/writing/post-self/motes/001.html b/writing/post-self/motes/001.html index 26aae6941..e19b232c1 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/motes/001.html +++ b/writing/post-self/motes/001.html @@ -149,7 +149,7 @@
“There is something to be said for curating one’s experiences, but anyone who says the words ‘there is a time and a place for everything’ is just being a bitch. Pardon my language.”
“What was Hammered Silver’s problem, then?”
Dry Grass frowned, looking down at her spread out fingers, watching the polish dry. “It is hard to put succinctly into words that make sense because then it just comes off as a series of tautologies. She thinks that there are children and there are adults. She thinks this because that is what makes a mother a mother to someone. The child is the child and the adult is the adult in contrast. They are complements. It is all very prescriptive.”
-Motes frowned and pulled apart the logic, doodling pink spirals onto her fingerpads. “So she thinks kids have to be actually kids? Actual children, even if there are non here?”
+Motes frowned and pulled apart the logic, doodling pink spirals onto her fingerpads. “So she thinks kids have to be actually kids? Actual children, even if there are none here?”
“I think so, yes, though it does not help that you are a cocladist of hers.”
“Is this that stupid optics thing again?”
“I do not know. Certainly in part, though it is also in part because, if you are her, then you could not be her child. You could not be a different age.” She hesitated, then added, “It would mean that she had the capability to become you, yes? That any of us would have that, yes?”
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@“Perish the thought!” The Odist laughed and leaned over to hug her cocladist, careful of her nails. “I will not. Do not worry, my dear, you are stuck with me for a good while yet. I would rather tell Hammered Silver to go fuck herself.”