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                 <h2 id="codrin-balanpollux-the-balan-clade">Codrin Bălan#Pollux &mdash; The Bălan clade</h2>
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+<p>systime 231 (2354)
+(transmission delays)</p>
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 <li class="done1"> Recapitulation<ol>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="015.html">Sorina → clade</a>: apology to Codrin, short, but promises more</li>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="016.html">Codrin#Pollux → Ioan + May</a>: talking w/ partner re them moving on</li>
-<li class="done0"> <a href="017.html">Codrin#Castor → clade</a>: to Sorina on moving on, tell us about yourself (nevermind Artemis, just you)</li>
+<li class="done2"> <a href="017.html">Codrin#Castor → clade</a>: to Sorina on moving on, tell us about yourself (nevermind Artemis, just you)</li>
 <li class="done0"> <a href="018.html">Ioan → Codrin#Pollux and Sorina?</a>: May on immortality vs. relationships.</li>
 <li class="done0"> <a href="019.html">Sorina → clade</a>: finding her way back into being comfortably solitary, wants to hold off on A/V communication with Castor until she has things a bit more sorted with her emotions.</li>
-<li class="done0"> <a href="020.html">Codrin#Pollux → clade</a>: moving on w/o partner, w/ Serene, attached video message showing A/V working between systems, just a huge delay and limited bandwidth.</li>
+<li class="done0"> <a href="020.html">Codrin#Pollux → clade</a>: moving on w/o partner, w/ Serene, attached image showing A/V working between systems, just a huge delay and limited bandwidth, Serene and Dear are collaborating</li>
 <li class="done1"> <a href="021.html">Aurel and Ioan → clade</a>: updates re: the clade fading to comfortable obscurity (doubtless TN&rsquo;s stanza is still active, perhaps others strive, but just folk now), Sasha back to striped skunk now that TN&rsquo;s relevance is fading, Aurel in and out of existence, passes on Sasha&rsquo;s work, incl redacted version for Dear, will publish on 250th anniversary of System founding to give other Odists time to prep for the Name. Rareș died phys-side, became writer, one book dedicated &lsquo;To Ioan&rsquo;.</li>
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