From 606e7ca7eec44f6260e1ce4a5a952566c1f587df Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary
Date: Wed, 28 Apr 2021 00:55:07 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup
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writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/index.html | 7 ++++---
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/index.html b/writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/index.html
index f29626556..9218b1fa8 100644
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+++ b/writing/sawtooth/limerent-object/index.html
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
(why the sense of duty and control: old-fashioned family of blue-collar coyotes - domestic animals being royalty, remember - pushed hard to lift him up)
Characters
-- Dee Kimana
+- Dewí “Dee” Kimana
- Coyote guy
- Psychologist
- Raised very religious
@@ -59,8 +59,9 @@
- Include more Job/Ecclesiastes-type thoughts
- Quote scripture?
-- Integrate prequel
+- Integrate prequel in Dee’s words
- Flesh out between current chapters.
+- Takes place around July 14, feast of St Kateri Tekakwitha
Feedback.
Story
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