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 <p>Timeboxed third attempt for academic in footnotes:</p>
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 <li class="done2"> <a href="reverse/intro.html">Intro</a></li>
-<li class="done1"> <a href="reverse/background.html">Background</a> &mdash; Andrew and Jill and the fundamental unhappiness of identity</li>
+<li class="done2"> <a href="reverse/background.html">Background</a> &mdash; Andrew and Jill and the fundamental unhappiness of identity</li>
 <li class="done1"> <a href="reverse/younes.html">Younes</a> &mdash; Gender play and hidden selves</li>
 <li class="done1"> <a href="reverse/dysphoria.html">Dysphoria</a> &mdash; The internal side</li>
 <li class="done1"> <a href="reverse/clash.html">Clash with Jill</a> &mdash; Stopped talking, told off for Younes, told to fuck off</li>
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 <p><a href="theology-points.html">theology points</a></p>
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-                <p>Page generated on 2023-08-25</p>
+                <p>Page generated on 2023-09-09</p>
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 <p>Enter Younes. Enter Younes and exit Makyo &mdash; at least in part.</p>
 <p>Enter Younes into so many situations with so many different people. Enter Younes into the lives of JD and Kita. Enter Younes into the home of Whiskey on that text-base role-play setting.</p>
 <p>Enter Younes, too, into art. Into drawings of him &mdash; him alone and with others &mdash; commissioned from artists throughout the fandom.</p>
+<p>My day to day life began to revolve around this reflection of some more feminine version of myself. Someone masculine, yes, but not <em>solely</em> masculine. Someone who might easily pass as male, even nude, and yet not solely that.</p>
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