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writing/post-self/secession.html

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 </li>
 <li>Future Arc (Launch)<ul>
 <li>System<ul>
-<li>Codrin Balan</li>
-<li>Ioan Balan</li>
-<li>Dear, Also, The Tree That Was Felled (Dear)</li>
+<li>Codrin Balan<ul>
+<li>Launch-side historian</li>
+</ul>
+</li>
+<li>Ioan Balan<ul>
+<li>Sys-side historian and launch coordinator</li>
+</ul>
+</li>
+<li>Dear, Also, The Tree That Was Felled (Dear)<ul>
+<li>Launch-side storyteller (new job title)</li>
+</ul>
+</li>
 <li>May Then My Name Die With Me (May Then My Name)<ul>
-<li>All of the above: Sys-side launch coordinators</li>
+<li>Sys-side storyteller</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>
@@ -74,8 +83,12 @@
 <li>Offline</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li>Launch (2125 - just after launch, characters retelling the story of the launch and the machinations behind it to each other (as letters, natch))<ul>
-<li>System</li>
+<li>Launch (2325 - just after launch, on bicentennial anniversary of system)<ul>
+<li>System<ul>
+<li>Sys-side</li>
+<li>Launch-side</li>
+</ul>
+</li>
 <li>Offline</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
@@ -90,6 +103,10 @@
 <li class="done0"> Act II</li>
 <li class="done0"> Act III</li>
 <li class="done0"> Conclusion</li>
+</ul>
+<h1 id="notes">Notes</h1>
+<ul>
+<li>The ships (identical) are similar to from <em>Accelerando</em> combined with a scissors mechanism a la Ilium and a rail gun. There&rsquo;s a small version of the System, an RTG for power, a few attitude jets, and a light sail once it&rsquo;s launched on each. Thin scaffold type thing about 10k kilometers long spun around the middle. In the scaffold is a rail gun to assist in propulsion as the ships are flung out into space by angular momentum, each in opposite directions.</li>
 </ul>
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