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Most of the Ode clade is human because Sasha didn't hone species as much, not as much identity built up in skunks, and thus little of her image bound to anything other than her human form. A few skunks, plus Dear and Serene
Reconsider Torah/Nevi'im/Ketuvim naming. Doesn't really fit. Either change/remove, or add in more kabbalah to fit.
Dear promises to discuss Umwelten with Ioan at the end
- Furries at risk due to relative affluence/online nature and yet those who upload rarely wind up as such in the system without mutating due to being anchored in their humanity.
+ Furries at risk due to relative affluence/online nature and yet those who upload rarely wind up as such in the system without mutating due to being anchored in their humanity.
Sasha toward the end starts feeling like she's organizing/gathering together/teaching (re: Qoheleth)
Maybe something from Sasha earlier in Part 2
- Ioan and dear need to work on the Solitaire encryption, and mention of PGP stuff needs to come up later
+ Ioan and dear need to work on the Solitaire encryption, and mention of PGP stuff needs to come up later
Also, perhaps Sasha swore off relationships after RJ died, thus Dear being shaky on relationships.
Order and status