From 7a075c6f0bb1d033bf76caca48ece79d743d1583 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <mscottclary@nvidia.com>
Date: Tue, 28 Sep 2021 09:05:12 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 writing/post-self/neviim/index.html              | 12 ++++++------
 writing/post-self/neviim/local/tycho/001.html    |  9 +--------
 writing/post-self/neviim/origin/history/001.html |  4 ++--
 3 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html
index d1bc89f5c..c8222e023 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html
+++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html
@@ -55,11 +55,11 @@
 </ul>
 <h2 id="on-the-origin-of-our-world">On the Origin of Our World</h2>
 <ul>
-<li class="done2"> Mythos<ul>
+<li class="done2"> Mythos - An Expanded Mythology of our World by May Then My Name Die With Me of the Ode clade<ul>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="origin/mythos/001.html">Reaching for the stars</a> - 517</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li class="done2"> History<ul>
+<li class="done2"> History - An Expanded History of our World by the Bălan clade<ul>
 <li class="done2"> <a href="origin/history/001.html">On the justifications for Launch</a> - 833</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
@@ -67,10 +67,10 @@
 <h2 id="outline">Outline</h2>
 <ul>
 <li class="done1"> Epigraph<ul>
-<li class="done1"> <em>Do not say, &ldquo;Why were the former days better than these?&rdquo; For it is not from wisdom that you ask this. Wisdom is as good as an inheritance, an advantage to those who see the sun.</em> &mdash; Ecclesiastes  7:10-11</li>
-<li class="done1"> <em>Again I saw that under the sun the race is not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, nor bread to the wise, nor riches to the intelligent, nor favor to the skillful; but time and chance happen to them all</em> &mdash; Ecclesiastes 9:11</li>
+<li class="rejected"> <em>Do not say, &ldquo;Why were the former days better than these?&rdquo; For it is not from wisdom that you ask this. Wisdom is as good as an inheritance, an advantage to those who see the sun.</em> &mdash; Ecclesiastes  7:10-11</li>
+<li class="rejected"> <em>Again I saw that under the sun the race is not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, nor bread to the wise, nor riches to the intelligent, nor favor to the skillful; but time and chance happen to them all</em> &mdash; Ecclesiastes 9:11</li>
 <li class="done1"> <em>Take my instruction instead of silver, and knowledge rather than choice gold; for wisdom is better than jewels and all that you may desire cannot compare with her.</em> &mdash; Proverbs 8:10-11</li>
-<li class="done1"> <em>Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light; I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night</em> &mdash; The Old Astronomer to His Pupil - Sarah Williams</li>
+<li class="rejected"> <em>Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light; I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night</em> &mdash; The Old Astronomer to His Pupil - Sarah Williams</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li class="done1"> Act I<ul>
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
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             </article>
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+                <p>Page generated on 2021-09-28</p>
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diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/local/tycho/001.html b/writing/post-self/neviim/local/tycho/001.html
index e94233380..01f7454d0 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/neviim/local/tycho/001.html
+++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/local/tycho/001.html
@@ -13,13 +13,6 @@
             </header>
             <article class="content">
                 <h1 id="tycho-brahe-2346">Tycho Brahe &mdash; 2346</h1>
-<blockquote>
-<p>While the reasons for the Launch project are complex and will be discussed in depth in a later portion of this history, it is important to establish a set of facts before continuing. This is no &ldquo;take care that you first place him in his time&rdquo;, some short fictional introduction to be placed at the chapter headings of some long-rambling fictional account. These facts are important because they provide much needed context for the project that led to our little diaspora.</p>
-<p>First and foremost among these facts, almost to the point where one might consider all following facts as following logically from it, is that Launch Day takes place exactly two hundred years after Secession Day.</p>
-<p>On the surface of it, especially for those who have had some connection with the event itself, this may seem like backwards. After all, so much happened around Launch. So much <em>had</em> to happen around Launch, yes? Sending off two multi-ton blocks of computronium and raw materials, solar sails and Dreamer Modules, out into unknown space takes rather a lot of work.</p>
-<p>But in all ways, that falls out of the simple fact that Launch Day occurred on the bicentennial Secession Day.</p>
-<p><em>&mdash; An Expanded History of Our World, by Ioan and Codrin of the Bălan Clade</em></p>
-</blockquote>
 <p>It took Tycho Brahe what felt like an age to remember Codrin Bălan, and then it took em a panicked age longer to remember that, yes, sensorium messages were a thing, had been a thing for more than two centuries, and a third age still to remember how to send one.</p>
 <p>There was some unknown urgency within him, and even though he supposed that there was no need to hurry, he nonetheless did not fork, deeming it not worth the time in his rush. Instead, he simply sent a message to the historian beginning with a jolt of adrenaline, and began talking.</p>
 <p>&ldquo;Codrin, uh, Mx Bălan, I really, really need to talk with you. Like, right now. I need to talk with you right now. Can we meet? It&rsquo;s incredibly urgent, I&rsquo;m sorry. I know it&rsquo;s late. Can we meet?&rdquo;</p>
@@ -82,7 +75,7 @@
 <p>Ey sighed, leaned over and patted him on the shoulder. &ldquo;Well, since I&rsquo;m sure as hell not sleeping anymore, I guess coffee&rsquo;s next. Coffee, and figuring out what to do with our wayward astronomer and upcoming guests.&rdquo;</p>
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diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/origin/history/001.html b/writing/post-self/neviim/origin/history/001.html
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--- a/writing/post-self/neviim/origin/history/001.html
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@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
             </header>
             <article class="content">
                 <p>While the reasons for the Launch project are complex and will be discussed in depth in a later portion of this history, it is important to establish a set of facts before continuing. This is no &ldquo;take care that you first place him in his time&rdquo;, some short fictional introduction to be placed at the chapter headings of some long-rambling fictional account. These facts are important because they provide much needed context for the project that led to our little diaspora.</p>
-<p>First and foremost among these facts, almost to the point where one might consider all following facts as following logically from it, is that Launch Day takes place exactly two hundred years after Secession Day.</p>
+<p>First and foremost among these facts, almost to the point where one might consider all other facts as following logically from it, is that Launch Day takes place exactly two hundred years after Secession Day.</p>
 <p>On the surface of it, especially for those who have had some connection with the event itself, this may seem like backwards. After all, so much happened around Launch. So much <em>had</em> to happen around Launch, yes? Sending off two multi-ton blocks of computronium and raw materials, solar sails and Dreamer Modules, out into unknown space takes rather a lot of work.</p>
 <p>But in all ways, that falls out of the simple fact that Launch Day occurred on the bicentennial Secession Day.</p>
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@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 </ul>
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