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Surprise day 2

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MFA — Surprise day 2 — Jennifer Knox

  1. Possession — reader can see the subject everywhere in the setting
    • Tracers, Echoes, Reflections, Mutations
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    • Too many suits move in too many lines.
      They circle banquet tables, hawk-eyed,
      hunting crudites, canapés, bruscheta.
      - Fingers ferry food, flipperlike, finding
      + Fingers ferry food — fish, perhaps — finding
      slack-jawed mouths already open,
      squawking at wayward children
      or bemoaning The Market,
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      through well-rehearsed performances,
      that this must be the case.
      - The bereaved already sit graveside, silent.
      • + The silently bereaved already sit graveside.
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  2. Tigers and clouds
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    • Specific vs nonspecific
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    • Everything/everybody is a ratio of tigers to clouds
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    • Attention suggests worthiness, power, love
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    • Misdirection = conscious or unconscious
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    • Surprise = expectations
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    • The automatic brain says “That deserves
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    • Fact: the more numerous your specifics are, the more likely they are to be wrong or a lie (paper)
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