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<p>&ldquo;Going to make it home okay?&rdquo;</p>
<p>Kira levered themself out of the reverie by force of will, stubbing out the sweet-spicy cigarette on the bottom of their shoe and tucking the butt into the empty pack they kept around for just such a purpose. Riley had walked away from the rest of the group &mdash; now half the size it had been before &mdash; and was standing beside them at what felt like a respectful distance.</p>
<p>The skunk wasn&rsquo;t sure why it was that they felt compelled to describe the distance as respectful. Riley was friendly enough. There was nothing about his attitude that suggested he was afraid of Kira. And yet here they were. Was it the smoke?</p>
<p>&ldquo;Yeah, I should.&rdquo; They pulled out their phone to check on the ride. &ldquo;Five minutes away, looks like.&rdquo;</p>
<p>&ldquo;Yeah, I should.&rdquo; They pulled out their phone to check on the ride. &ldquo;Five minutes away, looks like.&rdquo;<q class="comment">Check tone against start of story</q></p>
<p>The dog nodded. &ldquo;Long drive?&rdquo;</p>
<p>&ldquo;Nah, not too long, but I&rsquo;d prefer not to get beaned by a car on the way home.&rdquo;</p>
<p>Riley laughed. &ldquo;I would hope so.&rdquo;</p>