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subordination of one clause to another, unequal roles in a sentence
not defining (at least not literally, but interiority) but expanding/building/exemplify
Adds motion (e.g: immediate sentence, then use to further immediacy)
-Polysyndentons:
+- Polysyndetons:
- Figure of speech in which conjunctions are used to join connected clauses in places where they aren’t contextually necessary
- Creates senses/moods (e.g: conjunctions in list to show abundance)
+- could speed or slow, not always the same mechanism
+- religious sense due to biblical usage
+- can create overwhelming feelings
+Parataxis:
+- Placing starkly dissimilar images/fragments side by side
+- forces reader to make connections between dissimilar things
+
+