From 7f22c434ac570785c7576ee19fd12a2e158b45ca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <makyo@drab-makyo.com>
Date: Sat, 31 Dec 2022 11:40:09 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 diary/2022-12-31-subverting-sentences.html | 10 +++++++++-
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/diary/2022-12-31-subverting-sentences.html b/diary/2022-12-31-subverting-sentences.html
index 98d517c36..818a5072c 100644
--- a/diary/2022-12-31-subverting-sentences.html
+++ b/diary/2022-12-31-subverting-sentences.html
@@ -90,13 +90,21 @@
 <li>subordination of one clause to another, unequal roles in a sentence</li>
 <li>not defining (at least not literally, but interiority) but expanding/building/exemplify</li>
 <li>Adds motion (e.g: immediate sentence, then use to further immediacy)</li>
-<li>Polysyndentons:<ul>
+<li>Polysyndetons:<ul>
 <li>Figure of speech in which conjunctions are used to join connected clauses in places where they aren&rsquo;t contextually necessary</li>
 <li>Creates senses/moods (e.g: conjunctions in list to show abundance)</li>
+<li>could speed or slow, not always the same mechanism</li>
+<li>religious sense due to biblical usage</li>
+<li>can create overwhelming feelings</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>
 </li>
+<li>Parataxis:<ul>
+<li>Placing starkly dissimilar images/fragments side by side</li>
+<li>forces reader to make connections between dissimilar things</li>
+</ul>
+</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>