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 <p>Dr Carter Ramirez,</p>
 <p>We'd like to thank you, first of all, for all of your continued efforts in working on these cases of the lost. Your services are invaluable and are providing the families and friends of the lost with hope, not to mention the world at large. We have come to rely on this technology in our daily lives in almost all spheres of work and pleasure.</p>
-<p>As you know, research here at UCL is funded through a series of organizations and foundations working together. These relationships are both an expression of trust and a political statement, and both of those expressions work in both directions. As such, we welcome conversations, questions, and comments about research from the sponsors.</p>
+<p>As you know, research here at UCL is funded through a series of organizations and foundations working together. These relationships are both an expression of trust and a political statement, and both of those expressions work in both directions. As such, we welcome conversations, questions, and comments about research from the sponsors, mediated through the appropriate channels.</p>
 <p>A recent suggestion regarding your project was that more effort be placed on researching the neurological aspects of these cases, focusing primarily on the treatment and prevention of such events in the future.</p>
-<p>As such, we're requesting that you add one more neuroscientist intern to the team. Unfortunately, due to budgetary constraints, your team must remain the same size as it is currently. Could you please respond with the name of a member of your group not on the neuroscience side who will, if possible, be offered a transfer to another project? Admin will take care of the rest.</p>
+<p>As such, we're requesting that you add one more neuroscientist intern to the team. Unfortunately, due to budgetary constraints, your team must remain the same size as it is currently. At your earliest convenience, could you please respond with the name of a member of your group not on the neuroscience side who will, if possible, be offered a transfer to another project? Admin will take care of the rest.</p>
 <p>Please continue the excellent work. If you have any additional questions, please don't hesitate to send a note.</p>
-<p>Ari Liebler
+<p>Ari Liebler<br />
 Research Coordinator</p>
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-<p>Carter slid her chair slowly back from her rig and walked numbly to the coffee station. She wasn't tired. She wasn't tired. She was a bit too awake, if anything. She just needed something to do while mulling over the email from admin. The politely-worded request to change the course of her project and remove one of her team.</p>
+<p>Carter slid her chair slowly back from her rig and walked numbly to the coffee station. She wasn't tired. She <em>wasn't</em> tired. She was a bit too awake, if anything. She just needed something to do while mulling over the email from admin. The politely-worded request to change the course of her project and remove one of her team.</p>
 <p>Pouring herself a half cup of chicory coffee, she looked out over the room, at the heads bowed over tablets or nestled into the headrests of rigs. How could she possibly be expected to choose who would get the axe?</p>
 <p>Carter slipped back to her desk and delved in, stepping out of the workspace and into a side room, one of the small area off to the side of the main space where virtual meetings could be held where others' avs would show up in full focus rather than just shadowy shapes.</p>
 <p>Shadowy shapes. The dream still dogged her.</p>
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