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“May?” ey said, dropping eir cone of silence.

“Mm?”

“I was confirming a date with True Name and she said I should ask you about something called ‘Jingle Bells stage blocking’. Do you know–“

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The skunk let out a melodramatic groan and slid off her stool to the floor, landing on her hands and knees, laughing. “What a fucking brat.”

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The skunk let out a melodramatic groan and slid off her stool to the floor, landing on her hands and knees before flopping onto her side, laughing. “What a fucking brat.”

Ey stared at her, nonplussed.

“Oh God, Ioan, you do not know pain until you work with choir kids.”

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Ey laughed and shook eir head, standing to go stir the stew by way of ruffling over her ears. “You’re right, I don’t. Skunks are so weird. I’ll just have to trust you on that.”

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Ey laughed and shook eir head, leaning forward to ruffle over her ears. “You’re right, I don’t. Skunks are so weird. I’ll just have to trust you on that.”