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@@ -21,10 +21,10 @@
 <li>Tule (he/him) &mdash; (TOO-lee) In a relationship with Dry Grass</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li>Rush (ve/ver) &mdash; Interested in sims</li>
+<li>Rush (ve/ver) &mdash; Interested in sims, a bit rambunctious, excitable</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li>Lily (she/her) &mdash; Upset at the Odists (incl the fact that Tule and Cress are in a relationship with one)</li>
+<li>Lily (she/her) &mdash; Upset at the Odists (especially the fact that Tule and Cress are in a relationship with one)</li>
 <li>Cress (it/its) &mdash; In a relationship with Dry Grass, the smollest</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
 </ul>
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+                <p>Page generated on 2023-09-14</p>
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