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 <p>She ran until the trees ran out and she had to make a wake through stone and shale, through pebbles and snow, and our Ursula keep on running. She ran until the mountain beneath her feet ran out and the earth yawned open beneath her and all she had to make waves in was stars and the good clean black of the night.</p>
 <p>And her arms fell away in a flourish of a bow, spread in a genteel curtsy to no one but the moon, and those arms became stars, they became stars of brightest white because what better color could a star ever hope to be? Stars to wrap around the moon.</p>
 <p>And her legs fell away like a garment long past its prime, like those overalls that fit just so, the ones she&rsquo;d been mending years and years now, darning by camp stove and headlight and in plain light of day, suspending that baseness. They fell away and burned into that crisp brightness, standing stark as stars against the fabric of the night. They burned as bright as her arms, for every rock Ursula hauled or head she knocked, surely she&rsquo;d ran a mile.</p>
-<p>And she shed the mantle of the weight of the world, letting her shoulders fall off as easy as could be, as easy as the skin of beets boiled just long enougH, as easy as Sim dancing in the lights of the van that night out in the foothills. Shoulders falling away as easy as it was to jump.</p>
+<p>And she shed the mantle of the weight of the world, letting her shoulders fall off as easy as could be, as easy as the skin of beets boiled just long enough, as easy as Sim dancing in the lights of the van that night out in the foothills. Shoulders falling away as easy as it was to jump.</p>
 <p>And thus let her belly fall away like an apron full of boulders, that ever-soft curve no longer held taut to keep Sim from poking fun at it as he fucked her, hunching and curling above her and pretending like she was with child or fat as could be. Those boulders, too, they became stars in the sky, burning as bright as anything.</p>
-<p>And at long last she was able to reach up to the moon, reach up to the moon that one last time and give the face held within a kiss, leaving behind a twinkle of her eye, one last star, bright as all get-out, to show her love for the night and for the moon and for the good clean earth below.</p>
+<p>And at long last she was able to reach up to the moon, reach up to the moon that one last time, and give the face held within a kiss, leaving behind a twinkle of her eye, one last star, shining bright as all get-out, to show her love for the night and for the moon and for the good clean earth below.</p>
 <p>Nothing left of our Ursula but her yearning, insatiable shadow cast upon the ground as the moon rose ever higher and Sim cussed his cusses and the lights of the town twinkled below, and all we can do is hope that at last she gets to bury her feet in good clean earth and sow her carrots and beets, and if ever someone hunches and curls above her in labor or in lust or in pain or in joy, all we can do is hope that it will be out of more than a mere promise of love.</p>
 <p>Nothing left but a yearning shadow and those stars, cause some folks are just plain built to jump, but some were born to shine.</p>
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