From 90357bc1b65e823360d2636e64512ff08c18f316 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Wed, 13 Oct 2021 21:00:10 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/008.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/008.html b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/008.html index b331078a9..7f7e63899 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/008.html +++ b/writing/post-self/toledot/launch/sys/Ioan/008.html @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@

Ey paused, halfway into the bed.

“May I join you?”

Ey thought about all of the things Sadiah had said, all of the things ey’d learned about the Odists these last few weeks, both on eir own and through eir communications with the Codrins. Ey thought about all of the ways in which, whether or not they were true, this spoke to a level of manipulation that ey’d not suspected before. Ey thought, also, about how truly caught up in it ey was.

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And then ey nodded anyway, finished crawling into bed, and let May play with eir hair.

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And then ey nodded anyway, finished crawling into bed, and let May play with eir hair as ey rested eir head on her lap.

Ey felt helpless to do anything but.