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Taking an action
Aiding
Forking and merging
-XP and leveling
Sanity
+XP and leveling
PHB
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Longer-running forks (merging expected):
-- Add that fork to the party or briefly follow them through a bit of story (discuss with your group ahead of time)
+- Add that fork to the party or briefly follow them through a bit of story (discuss with your group ahead of time)
- Roll Savvy once to fork and again to merge
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1 — Success; take twice the number of unticked Savvy boxes in sanity
-The MC may modify the sanity risk depending on confounding factors such as how long the fork has been around
+The MC may modify the sanity risk depending on factors such as how long the fork has been around or the character taking extra care at the expense of time
-XP and leveling
-
-- Gain XP at the end of a session every time you did one of these (max 2 per):
-- Succeeding on a test reality roll or used an ability successfully
-- Expressing one of your virtues in a fulfilling way
-- Recoup 2 points of sanity
-- MC’s bonus
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-
-- When XP is maxed, add a die to a stat or recoup up to 8 sanity, then untick the XP slots
-
Sanity
+XP and leveling
+
+- Gain XP at the end of a session every time you did one of these (max 2 per):
+- Succeeding on a test reality roll or used an ability successfully
+- Expressing one of your virtues in a fulfilling way
+- Recoup 2 points of sanity
+- MC’s bonus
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+
+- When XP is maxed:
+- Untick all the XP slots
+- Add a die to a stat or recoup up to 8 sanity
+- Describe how this change happened
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PHB
MCG
About Post-Self