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                 <h1 id="true-name-2124">True Name &mdash; 2124</h1>
-<p>The next meeting spot for the Council of Eight was in a rooftop bar.</p>
+<p>The next meeting spot for the Council of Eight was in a rooftop bar. However, given that that rooftop bar was in the midst of a block of apartment buildings and vertical malls that had simply built with shared walls, such that there was a cubic half-mile of stair-climbing, elevator rides &mdash; down as well as up &mdash; and trestles that bridged buildings of lower height than higher ones, it was more adventure getting to the venue than the meeting itself promised.</p>
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