From a27f81c98421af14d4e8b6fd7ed42c65d7948c16 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <makyo@drab-makyo.com>
Date: Wed, 16 Mar 2022 12:15:17 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.html b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.html
index ecb11d681..294d42004 100644
--- a/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.html
+++ b/writing/post-self/mitzvot/index.html
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 <li>Unclear feelings (a little bit vindictive, like she wants to prove TN&rsquo;s way of life wrong, but also cracks in hate showing, empathy, respect even if don&rsquo;t like)</li>
 <li>Turns out she kinda lied, hasn&rsquo;t done so in a century or w&rsquo;evs</li>
 <li>big conversation because then TN has memories of May being with Ioan</li>
-<li>calls into question how much individuation is in effect when memories are from completely different g personality type (conflicts)</li>
+<li>calls into question how much individuation is in effect when memories are from completely different personality type (conflicts)</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>Ioan sends fork back to clear out house, lock down ACLs</li>
@@ -49,12 +49,26 @@
 <li>original TN collapses, goes catatonic for a good 5 hours while processing</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
+<li>Jonas arrives and explains just what it is he&rsquo;s doing<ul>
+<li>With the impending change that allows A/V transmission between sys- and phys-side, he thinks that phys-side will expect a much more coherent experience sys-side</li>
+<li>TN isn&rsquo;t being made an example of because she&rsquo;s TN, but because in the context of the <em>History</em>, she&rsquo;s visible as an architect, and thus there needs to be a sense that leadership is malleable</li>
+<li>Besides, she&rsquo;s kind of failing now, isn&rsquo;t she? [cue shit-eating politician grin]</li>
+</ul>
+</li>
+<li>Meanwhile, May and Ioan have to process what it means that TN now has memories of their relationship<ul>
+<li>You have the memories, but not the mental framework required to process such (May is empathetic, which TN still struggles with, but now she has the memories, one type of conflict)</li>
+<li>How much does individuation matter?</li>
+<li>What will TN&rsquo;s feelings for Ioan be?</li>
+<li>How is ey expected to feel about her?</li>
+<li>This should all be done very kind and open and good conversation because that&rsquo;s how the Odists do. Perhaps Sarah involved?</li>
+</ul>
+</li>
 <li>???</li>
 <li>Profit<ul>
-<li>Does TN quit?</li>
-<li>Probably not, but maybe she changes a la Sorina on Ioan&rsquo;s suggestion</li>
-<li>May talks her through changing personality w/ forks</li>
-<li>Into what? Kinda want to say RJ just to be a shit</li>
+<li>Second meeting with Jonas, Ioan as amanuensis once more.</li>
+<li>He makes it plain that she&rsquo;s the sacrifice in order to ensure stability</li>
+<li>She can continue living, he&rsquo;s not that cruel, just not as TN anymore (call back to Demma/Yared)</li>
+<li>She works with May to change (into ???) both physically and emotionally, changes name to When I Dream? Or drops out of the clade a la Qoheleth?</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>