From a310810b851ff84d1e2778dba6955b3360f56a33 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <mscottclary@nvidia.com>
Date: Thu, 26 Aug 2021 14:40:05 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 </li>
 <li>Offline<ul>
 <li>Douglas struggles with being a hermit/launch tech/coordinator but also wanting to talk with Michelle - basically his whole POV is the tech aspect of the launch, while also providing history of life outside since secession</li>
-<li>~~de and its collective struggle to get anyone to even want to prevent the launch, but humanity has mostly turned inward and lost interest in exploration, now super conservative, as life is pretty damn hellish outside their heads, leaning heavily on escapism. Uploading is seen as just sort of the thing you do when you get tired enough, if you don&rsquo;t die first, etc. Jealous because upload and lose connection to earth, or remain on earth and never do anything interesting, strange desire to keep the species on the same path. Boils down to fatalism, and its story is learning why that is.~~</li>
+<li>~~~de and its collective struggle to get anyone to even want to prevent the launch, but humanity has mostly turned inward and lost interest in exploration, now super conservative, as life is pretty damn hellish outside their heads, leaning heavily on escapism. Uploading is seen as just sort of the thing you do when you get tired enough, if you don&rsquo;t die first, etc. Jealous because upload and lose connection to earth, or remain on earth and never do anything interesting, strange desire to keep the species on the same path. Boils down to fatalism, and its story is learning why that is.~~~</li>
 <li>Kind of wondering if de should just be told through Douglas. Already a lot of characters.</li>
 <li>PAYOFF: tied with May Then My Name&rsquo;s histories, a renewed sense of adventure outside of the mind</li>
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