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<p>&ldquo;The movement itself was,&rdquo; she said. &ldquo;Though hitting my tail was not.&rdquo;</p>
<p>&ldquo;So no &lsquo;I deserved that one&rsquo;?&rdquo;</p>
<p>She sat down on the edge of the stage, kicking her feet idly. &ldquo;It was not in there, no, but I think I will keep it.&rdquo;</p>
<p>Ey grinned and closed eir notebook around eir pen, setting it aside to stand. &ldquo;Yeah, it&rsquo;s good in there,&rdquo; ey said, leaning forward to give the bridge of the skunk&rsquo;s snout a kiss. May squinted her eyes shut and then scrubbed a paw over her muzzle. &ldquo;I mean, the whole thing&rsquo;s good. Only note I really had is that you say &lsquo;hate&rsquo; four times in a pretty short span right after you stood up. &lsquo;That to hate&rsquo;, then &lsquo;truly hate&rsquo;, then &lsquo;object of your hatred&rsquo;, and then &lsquo;little bit of hatred&rsquo;.&rdquo;</p>
<p>Ey grinned and closed eir notebook around eir pen, setting it aside to stand. &ldquo;Yeah, it&rsquo;s good in there,&rdquo; ey said, leaning forward to give the bridge of her snout a kiss. She squinted her eyes shut and then scrubbed a paw over her muzzle. &ldquo;I mean, the whole thing&rsquo;s good. Only note I really had is that you say &lsquo;hate&rsquo; four times in a pretty short span right after you stood up. &lsquo;That to hate&rsquo;, then &lsquo;truly hate&rsquo;, then &lsquo;object of your hatred&rsquo;, and then &lsquo;little bit of hatred&rsquo;.&rdquo;</p>
<p>&ldquo;Should I make them all different?&rdquo;</p>
<p>&ldquo;I&rsquo;d keep the first two because it works as an echo, so maybe just change the fourth? &lsquo;Loathing&rsquo;?&rdquo;</p>
<p>&ldquo;Excellent, O great wordsmith.&rdquo;</p>
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<p>Ey gave her a playful shove with eir shoulder, at which she let out an outsized yelp followed by a whimper. &ldquo;So mean!&rdquo;</p>
<p>&ldquo;Yeah, that&rsquo;s me. Meanest person you know.&rdquo;</p>
<p>She rolled her eyes.</p>
<p>Ey let a long silence play then, looking out into the cool darkness of the theater while eir partner summoned up her notebook and scribbled down eir tip from earlier.</p>
<p>Ey let a long silence play then, looking out into the cool darkness of the theater while May summoned up her notebook and scribbled down eir tip from earlier.</p>
<p>&ldquo;Do you really feel that way?&rdquo;</p>
<p>&ldquo;Mm?&rdquo;</p>
<p>&ldquo;The jagged edges and self-loathing.&rdquo;</p>
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<p>Ey laughed and pushed at her until she sat up before sliding off the stage and walking back to eir seat. &ldquo;Alright. Once more, from the top.&rdquo;</p>
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