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<p>“The movement itself was,” she said. “Though hitting my tail was not.”</p>
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<p>“The movement itself was,” she said. “Though hitting my tail was not.”</p>
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<p>“So no ‘I deserved that one’?”</p>
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<p>“So no ‘I deserved that one’?”</p>
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<p>She sat down on the edge of the stage, kicking her feet idly. “It was not in there, no, but I think I will keep it.”</p>
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<p>She sat down on the edge of the stage, kicking her feet idly. “It was not in there, no, but I think I will keep it.”</p>
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<p>Ey grinned and closed eir notebook around eir pen, setting it aside to stand. “Yeah, it’s good in there,” ey said, leaning forward to give the bridge of the skunk’s snout a kiss. May squinted her eyes shut and then scrubbed a paw over her muzzle. “I mean, the whole thing’s good. Only note I really had is that you say ‘hate’ four times in a pretty short span right after you stood up. ‘That to hate’, then ‘truly hate’, then ‘object of your hatred’, and then ‘little bit of hatred’.”</p>
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<p>Ey grinned and closed eir notebook around eir pen, setting it aside to stand. “Yeah, it’s good in there,” ey said, leaning forward to give the bridge of her snout a kiss. She squinted her eyes shut and then scrubbed a paw over her muzzle. “I mean, the whole thing’s good. Only note I really had is that you say ‘hate’ four times in a pretty short span right after you stood up. ‘That to hate’, then ‘truly hate’, then ‘object of your hatred’, and then ‘little bit of hatred’.”</p>
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<p>“Should I make them all different?”</p>
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<p>“Should I make them all different?”</p>
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<p>“I’d keep the first two because it works as an echo, so maybe just change the fourth? ‘Loathing’?”</p>
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<p>“I’d keep the first two because it works as an echo, so maybe just change the fourth? ‘Loathing’?”</p>
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<p>“Excellent, O great wordsmith.”</p>
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<p>“Excellent, O great wordsmith.”</p>
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<p>Ey gave her a playful shove with eir shoulder, at which she let out an outsized yelp followed by a whimper. “So mean!”</p>
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<p>Ey gave her a playful shove with eir shoulder, at which she let out an outsized yelp followed by a whimper. “So mean!”</p>
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<p>“Yeah, that’s me. Meanest person you know.”</p>
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<p>“Yeah, that’s me. Meanest person you know.”</p>
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<p>She rolled her eyes.</p>
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<p>She rolled her eyes.</p>
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<p>Ey let a long silence play then, looking out into the cool darkness of the theater while eir partner summoned up her notebook and scribbled down eir tip from earlier.</p>
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<p>Ey let a long silence play then, looking out into the cool darkness of the theater while May summoned up her notebook and scribbled down eir tip from earlier.</p>
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<p>“Do you really feel that way?”</p>
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<p>“Do you really feel that way?”</p>
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<p>“Mm?”</p>
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<p>“Mm?”</p>
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<p>“The jagged edges and self-loathing.”</p>
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<p>“The jagged edges and self-loathing.”</p>
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<p>Ey laughed and pushed at her until she sat up before sliding off the stage and walking back to eir seat. “Alright. Once more, from the top.”</p>
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<p>Ey laughed and pushed at her until she sat up before sliding off the stage and walking back to eir seat. “Alright. Once more, from the top.”</p>
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