From ab99bf977a7733175c6805523658ab3c85ed2eeb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Madison Scott-Clary <makyo@drab-makyo.com>
Date: Sat, 10 Oct 2020 11:45:09 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup

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 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>Development<ul>
-<li>Transition to development: changing one&rsquo;s life: deciding to switch to music vs deciding to leave bconnected</li>
-<li>Theme A vs theme B building tension and modulating - add in magical realism bit by bit</li>
+<li>Transition to development: the moment they started coinciding was when I started walking when composing/composing when walking</li>
+<li>Theme A vs theme B building tension and modulating - add in magical realism bit by bit and it turns out the magical realism is just escaping depression</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>Recapitulation<ul>
@@ -31,34 +31,47 @@
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>Coda<ul>
-<li>Remembering the faintness of heart that went with the decision not to walk and how similar that was with accepting losing one&rsquo;s body</li>
+<li>Remembering the faintness of heart that went with the decision not to walk and how similar that was with accepting losing one&rsquo;s body and maybe I do hear music in the everyday and getting away from it is as hopeless as getting away from movement.</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 </ul>
 <p>I think the thing that helped me get through Qoheleth alright was starting to write (or at least outline) the two separately, and then work on interleaving them about oh I dunno maybe halfway through, so.</p>
+<p>Also vi doesn&rsquo;t like working with me at list depths greater than three, so.</p>
+<h3 id="theme-a">Theme A</h3>
 <ul>
-<li>Theme A<ul>
 <li>Introduction<ul>
-<li><a href="i-would-love-to-tell-you.html">I would love to tell you&hellip;</a></li>
-<li><a href="i-just-love-office-supplies.html">I just love office supplies</a></li>
+<li><a href="love-to-tell-you.html">I would love to tell you&hellip;</a></li>
+<li><a href="office-supplies.html">I just love office supplies</a></li>
+<li><a href="why-sax.html">Why am I playing saxophone?</a></li>
+<li><a href="oboes.html">Oboes and ownership over one&rsquo;s own life</a></li>
+<li><a href="choir.html">Wow omigosh choir</a></li>
+<li><a href="sibelius.html">And then my dad bought me Sibelius</a></li>
+</ul>
+</li>
+<li>Development<ul>
+<li><a href="walking-while-composing.html">At some point I started walking while composing</a></li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li>Development</li>
 <li>Recapitulation</li>
 <li>Coda</li>
 </ul>
-</li>
-<li>Theme B<ul>
+<h3 id="theme-b">Theme B</h3>
+<ul>
 <li>Introduction<ul>
 <li><a href="important-research.html">The importance of doing your own damn research</a></li>
 <li><a href="folly-research.html">The folly of doing your own damn research</a></li>
+<li><a href="rocking.html">Rocking out vs just rocking</a> (thinking &ldquo;gosh, at least I don&rsquo;t have that&rdquo; as I saw the guy in the car behind me rocking out thinking about TD)</li>
+<li><a href="hands-vs-head.html">Are my hands moving? Is my head moving?</a> (at bconnected)</li>
+<li><a href="saying-no.html">Saying no on an ongoing basis</a> (tic at bconnected getting frustrating)</li>
+<li><a href="leaving.html">Leaving for new pastures</a> </li>
+</ul>
+</li>
+<li>Development<ul>
+<li><a href="composing-while-walking.html">At some point I started composing while walking</a></li>
 </ul>
 </li>
-<li>Development</li>
 <li>Recapitulation</li>
 <li>Coda</li>
-</ul>
-</li>
 </ul>
             </article>
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