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Part III - Arrival (all stories reach present, all discuss irreversibility)
- Secession: phys-side: Yared - Vote passes with both secession and L5 amendments intact, those who know him are torn on whether he’s a hero or villain; zero compensation/recognition from Demma, who derides the system, why don’t you marry it if you love it so much. (secession = irreversibility)
-- Secession: sys-side: True Name - Council meets, celebrates; after, meets with Jonas to discuss ways to ensure stability going forward.
-- Launch: sys-side: Ioan - Ioan interviews True Name, finds out she’s still everywhere w/ Jonas, steering system, difference between conservatives/liberals is scale of manipulation, liberals think too small (see quote below)
- Launch: launch-side: Codrin#Green - Interviews True Name for the last time, learning that True Name/her stanza and Jonas orchestrated the launch from the beginning, have been in contact across sys/launch (irreversible), comes home to Dear, sighs, gets hugs, comfort that the ends aren’t bad, even if the means are.
+- Secession: sys-side: True Name - Council meets, celebrates; after, meets with Jonas to discuss ways to ensure stability going forward (growth = irreversibility)
+- Launch: sys-side: Ioan - Ioan interviews True Name, finds out she’s still everywhere w/ Jonas, steering system, difference between conservatives/liberals is scale of manipulation, liberals think too small (see quote below)
- Launch: sys-side: Ioan - kind of freaks out at May b/c like finding out your in-laws-ish are the illuminati, though ey comes around because a) she explains need for control as trauma response, and b) tells myth in progress, about how the gods created the world in an attempt to shape it to their will, but instead became impersonal forces in the face of absolute independence
- Launch: launch-side: Codrin#Blue - Interviews Dear about just how much influence the Ode clade had/still has, what’s next (death = irreversible, but Dear doesn’t make Codrin cry in this LV)
- Launch: sys-side: Ioan - Ioan and May get together, discuss irreversibility of that act, since Ioan didn’t fork like Codrin; if the clade exists to explore/exploit need as trauma reaction, what do each of the stanzas do (True Name’s: political machinations; Praiseworthy’s: artistic machinations), liberal side (not always later lines) has grown more earnest, rebelling against need to control.