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Story
Using romance beats
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- Goal/agenda
- A: Likes Kay, emotional literacy
- B: Left pastoral life/path, no love = okay
-- Meet cute
+- Meet cute (working backwards)
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- No way #2
- Bone town
-- A: Visit, finally acknowledge feelings may be real
+- A: [Visit, finally acknowledge feelings may be real
- Seeds of doubt
- Wallow #1 - I knew better when…
- A: Weird concert/dinner
-- B: Discernment
+- B: Discernment - discussion with Borenson
- Retreat - soft spots exposed
- A: Back to hotel, then hike by himself, talking with god
-- B: Discernment
+- B: Discernment - struggling with self definition
- Choose fear - break up!
- A: Hanging out, reading ???: totes not going to work out
-- B: Discernment
+- B: Discernment - talk with god, decide to go with it
- Wallow #2
- A: Going home, feeling rough re: giving up
-- B: Coming home after discernment
+- B: Discernment - leaving
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- Payoff
- A: Limerence fades, settle back into new, more open friendship/what could have been
-- B: Doubt fades, settle into lay life/what could have been
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-- Epilogue/hope
+- B: Doubt fades, settle into lay life/what could have been
+13 [ ] Epilogue/hope
- A: Plans another visit/okay being friends
- B: Starts volunteering MH counselling services at church.
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Old outline