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 <li>carries note from father (complicated relationship) with gaelic blessing &ldquo;may the road rise up to meet you&rdquo;</li>
 <li>linguist talks about translation, offers original</li>
 <li>starts focusing on last line &ldquo;may god hold you in the palm of his hand&rdquo;<ul>
-<li>CF Isaiah 49:16 - &ldquo;See, I have engraved you on the palms of my hands&rdquo;</li>
+<li>Where lies the strangling fruit that came from the hand of the sinner</li>
+<li>Physicist, christian, chimes in Isaiah 49:16 - &ldquo;See, I have engraved you on the palms of my hands&rdquo;</li>
 <li>just an obsession with hands all around</li>
 <li>A hand in your making, a bird in the hand, hands forced, hand in hand, blood on your hands, washing one&rsquo;s hands of the matter</li>
 </ul>
@@ -41,7 +42,7 @@ Go gcoinní Dia i mbos A láimhe thú. </div>
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-                <p>Page generated on 2020-05-27</p>
+                <p>Page generated on 2020-05-28</p>
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