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                 <h1>Zk | Nasturtiums</h1>
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+We talked about this in the tub:
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+* If Muse sent this to Beholden and *then* went to go watch the firework, Beholden would have had time to go interrupt her and bring Pointillist with.
+* They went to go try and stop her, got there partway through the firework
+* Muse pretty angry about this, crying, saying they were not supposed to be there
+* They talk for an hour or two, but Muse convinces them (Pointillist first) that this is the right thing for her to do.
+* Beholden forks beforehand, lets down-tree take the merge and try to decide whether or not to incorporate it.
+* She decides not to because, at that moment, she's worried it'll overwhelm who she is and change the dynamic she's worked on so hard with Pointillist.
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 <p>Beholden To The Heat Of The Lamps,</p>
 <p>It has been seven days. One week, I promised myself. I would wait one week while I watched the System limp back to life. I would wait a week and see what all was being done, what could be done to save the lost.</p>