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 <p>&ldquo;It <em>was</em> good, Kay, promise. I&rsquo;m not the best judge of music&ndash;&rdquo; She smirked at this, but I continued. &ldquo;&ndash;so some of the music part went over my head.&rdquo;</p>
 <p>Her own ears perked up, and it was her turn to wait me into talking more.</p>
 <p>&ldquo;Like, it sounded dissonant and dark. Not angry or sad or anything. It just sounded dark, like there was a lot going on beneath the surface when you wrote them.&rdquo;</p>
-<p>Her expression softened and she nodded. &ldquo;I think there was. I didn&rsquo;t mean for all of them to be dark, though. Some of that was some shitty performances. I had some choice words for some of them after.&rdquo;</p>
+<p>Her expression softened and she nodded. &ldquo;I think there was. I didn&rsquo;t mean for all of them to be dark, though. Some of that was some shitty performances. I had some choice words for some of the performers after.&rdquo;</p>
 <p>&ldquo;I&rsquo;m not quite educated enough to say one way or another on that.&rdquo; I thought for a second, and then shrugged. &ldquo;And I don&rsquo;t think I&rsquo;m educated enough to say whether or not the music was too academic or too emotionally abstruse. It did sound like there was a lot going on, though, and that a lot of that was maybe stuff you couldn&rsquo;t put into words.&rdquo;</p>
 <p>She nodded. &ldquo;There was, yeah. And no reason it can&rsquo;t be both, right? That&rsquo;s what I was thinking about. Some of the emotions I was feeling and trying to put into music were complex, and maybe went over the audience&rsquo;s heads, but also this was supposed to show my talent as a composer, and so I was supposed to write really, uh&hellip;academically dense stuff. Show-off-y, you know?&rdquo;</p>
 <p>&ldquo;So, all that plus your performers lackluster showing, I can see that leading to feeling like it just didn&rsquo;t translate well.&rdquo;</p>