From c2b43e3a439ad0fb3d5f2a0291cc15eacc455a98 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Wed, 29 Sep 2021 22:10:11 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/post-self/neviim/index.html | 24 +++++++++++++++++------- 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html index 30cbbec3b..aad5c9754 100644 --- a/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html +++ b/writing/post-self/neviim/index.html @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
  • Begins with a lot of learning about each other
  • Shifts to gentle nudges this way and that to information sent between the two ships and between DMZ and System as a whole
  • Shifts from there to gentle nudges back and forth on each others’ societies
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  • Climax??? Maybe there is a subversive faction of both humans and aliens who figures out how to break through the DMZ on each? Or perhaps humans are invited to join the other 4 species on the ship, also expand the DMZ (can’t/won’t change it from one-way, but folks can send forks into it to live, communicate through perisystem border. Tickles Dear because can’t merge forks back
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  • Climax??? Maybe there is a subversive faction of both humans and aliens who figures out how to break through the DMZ on each? Or perhaps humans are invited to join the other 4 species on the ship, also expand the DMZ (can’t/won’t change it from one-way, but folks can send forks into it to live, communicate through perisystem border. Codrin finally figures eir shit out so ey can make the proposal to also send forks to the DMZickles Dear because can’t merge forks back
  • Denouement: Who’s upset? Who’s happy? Why? What’s next?
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