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 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>de (because why not be goofy with names, it&rsquo;s the dang future)<ul>
-<li>Member of collective</li>
+<li>Member of Luddite collective</li>
 <li>Wants to prevent launch b/c Earth is kinda falling apart and rapidly depopulating, and it resents that.</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
@@ -103,8 +103,18 @@
 </li>
 <li>Launch (2325 - just after launch, on bicentennial anniversary of system)<ul>
 <li>System<ul>
-<li>Sys-side</li>
-<li>Launch-side</li>
+<li>Sys-side<ul>
+<li>Ioan A is actually kind of eager to not be taking part in next huge thing, and to be reading and compiling Codrin&rsquo;s letters from launch side.</li>
+<li>Ioan B interviews locals who specifically did not go</li>
+<li>Ioan C acts as launch coordinator</li>
+<li>May Then Thy Name co-authors the story with Ioan as a permanent-yet-evolving experiential exhibit</li>
+</ul>
+</li>
+<li>Launch-side<ul>
+<li>Codrin, Dear, and its partner head off in their sim, interviewing those who have decided to come with (both seeds are identical in crew and capacity, but will obv diverge further and further apart with time).</li>
+<li>Dear has thoughts on irreversability of time</li>
+</ul>
+</li>
 </ul>
 </li>
 <li>Offline</li>