From c55fef28d38135206306366f44a183cfe1a091ad Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Mon, 18 Sep 2023 11:15:11 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/3/terrifying/assessment.html | 10 +++++++--- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/3/terrifying/assessment.html b/writing/3/terrifying/assessment.html index 23e4ed8dc..8c92cdfe9 100644 --- a/writing/3/terrifying/assessment.html +++ b/writing/3/terrifying/assessment.html @@ -53,14 +53,18 @@ Earth’s skyward outskirts had been smarting there.\footnote{\parencite[47]

“I think I am embarrassed because of the role our interactions have played in bringing this to the surface.”

There was a moment of silence as, I imagine, ey leaned back in eir chair, brow knit. “Goodness, what a tapestry.”

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Angel, oh take it, pluck it, that tiny-flowered healing herb.
-Protect it! Find a vase for it! Place it among those joys
-not yet open to us, in an appealing urn.\footnote{\parencite[51]{duino}}

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Listen to me. I am your echo.\footnote{\parencite[149]{timewar}}

And there, behind the scenes, that delamination prickled further through my paper-thin self.

How I would then like to hide from the longing […]\footnote{\parencite[59]{duino}}

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Angel, oh take it, pluck it, that tiny-flowered healing herb.
+Protect it! Find a vase for it! Place it among those joys
+not yet open to us, in an appealing urn.\footnote{\parencite[51]{duino}}

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((Getting stuck in my head))