From c917ade2f2353085515e8521eabb016f927a33ba Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Madison Scott-Clary Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2020 14:30:20 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] update from sparkleup --- writing/poetry/pale-she.html | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/writing/poetry/pale-she.html b/writing/poetry/pale-she.html index a3ff4c838..772f95660 100644 --- a/writing/poetry/pale-she.html +++ b/writing/poetry/pale-she.html @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Thoughts like leaves fall slow, hesitate, drift, rustle, sigh. Frost-rimed remnants rot. -Some paler she asks:
+Some paler she asks: do you see the sky through me? Do I frame its mien? @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ Let this be her spring.

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