update from sparkleup

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Madison Scott-Clary 2020-11-30 22:49:32 -08:00
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<li>Ýng is nonbinary, They/Their. NB: go back and capitalize.</li>
<li>Fix tenses, they&rsquo;re all over the place</li>
<li>More scent, more tactility - whiskers etc</li>
<li>More detail later on, since there&rsquo;s so much early on. Describe seed cakes, describe the light and how confusing it is, describe how childlike he feels</li>
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<h2 id="characters">Characters</h2>
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