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<li>Ýng is nonbinary, They/Their. NB: go back and capitalize.</li>
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<li>Fix tenses, they’re all over the place</li>
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<li>More scent, more tactility - whiskers etc</li>
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<li>More detail later on, since there’s so much early on. Describe seed cakes, describe the light and how confusing it is, describe how childlike he feels</li>
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<h2 id="characters">Characters</h2>
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