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  • Ioan B interviews locals who specifically did not go
  • Ioan C acts as early system historian
  • May Then Thy Name, her role as launch coordinator diminished post-launch, co-authors the story with Ioan as a permanent-yet-evolving mythology, specifically changing small details to make it grandiose, turn it into a new mythology. She also provides the historical background.
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  • They are also gay for each other.
  • PAYOFF: histories are published back on Earth, awaken sense of adventure
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  • Secession: phys-side: Yared - Yared gives a speech on individual rights, then drawn aside by Yosef, out for coffee, tells of secession proposal - 2608
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  • Act II