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+ Zk | Further Confusion Writing Workshop 2023
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Workshop notes
+Friday — Critical reading
-- Friday — Critical reading
- Intro
- Intro self (incl. “this is for MFA” spiel)
- Allow others to intro
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-- Saturday — Critiquing in workshop
+Saturday — Critiquing in workshop
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- What is workshopping?
- More important, what is it not?
- Tearing apart a story
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- Tomorrow: writing to receive critique/actually receiving critique
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+Sunday — Writing to expect critique
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- https://makyo.io/fcww23s
- Writing and vulnerability
- Vulnerability in creation
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- Reflect on how that felt
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